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 Comic TEoR: Her Future

Discussion in 'Avencri's Works' started by RJ_Prime, Sep 4, 2017.

  1. RJ_Prime

    RJ_Prime Couldn't avoid Xhianil's fangs

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  2. Chaos Sepher

    Chaos Sepher Gallery Volunteer

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    @Avencri you may want to reword Ginny's line to "the Queen wants to marry her off." The way it reads now sounds like Jane wants to be the one to marry Mayte.

    And I really want to see Mayte and Ghassan interact.
     
  3. MrAMP

    MrAMP No. 1 Fun Guy Community Contributor

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    Ah snap! Alex just got motherly pawned!

    No but seriously though, stellar job on the layout of these panels to compliment the rather bulky text.
     
  4. Radagast

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    Seconding Chaos's suggested wording change. You're trying to "marry off" someone when you're playing matchmaker. You're trying to marry someone when you propose to them (or accept a proposal from them).
     
  5. Urien Lævateinn

    Urien Lævateinn Knight- Errant

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    Isn't this whole marriage thing about trying to keep mayte's species of Dragon alive? Because I'm pretty sure the last of your kind falls into the category of funtionally extinct.
     
  6. Avencri

    Avencri Staff Member Katbox Comic Artist

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    @Chaos Sepher i guess that is a better wording. I am not a native english speaker so i always trust the writers when they do the grammar check. Next page is about Ghassan and Mayte.

    @Urien Lævateinn You are correct, the most they can do is have Mayte's mate be of the closest related species. The kids would be hybrids but still close to the lake serpent. Basically, the species is gone in the pure form.
     
  7. Urien Lævateinn

    Urien Lævateinn Knight- Errant

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    But then to ensure the hybrid species kept existing every one of mayte's kids would be born with the massive resposibility of repopulating the race when full grown.
     
  8. Avencri

    Avencri Staff Member Katbox Comic Artist

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    Pretty much... but that is WAY beyond the scope of the comic at the moment. Ghassan is not looking for a wife and Mayte is probably not interested either. It would be like trying to breed pandas. XD
     
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  9. Chaos Sepher

    Chaos Sepher Gallery Volunteer

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    @Avencri yeah that does read better now, thanks.

    @RJ_Prime Ya may want to update the OP
     
  10. MrAMP

    MrAMP No. 1 Fun Guy Community Contributor

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    Hm…now that I’m reading all the comments, this appears to be pretty much a foil between Alex and Mayte having/wanting kids and their “responsibilities” to family and species. Very interesting approach to the subject.
     
  11. Rosscoe

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    So much feelings being poured out of Alex here, only to be brought into the light be Queen Jane.

    You know I bet Jane and Alex would make a cute couple. Light & Dark, Yin & Yang, Black & White, HA HA! Metaphor's.
     

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